[Barrelfish-users] Small fixes on device driver documentation

Timothy Roscoe troscoe at inf.ethz.ch
Mon Nov 21 19:06:19 CET 2016


Dear Rodrigo,

Many thanks!

 -- Mothy

At Mon, 21 Nov 2016 09:35:03 -0200, Rodrigo Siqueira <rodrigosiqueiramelo at gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> When I was reading the device driver documentation I have found some small
> problems, follow:
> 
> 1 - In Chapter 2, second paragraph, in the sentence: "... build system. We
> wil look ...". I believe it is a paragraph after '.'
> 2 - In Chapter 2, ninth paragraph, first sentence: "For the the FDIF
> device...". Double 'the'.
> 3 - In Chapter 3, Section 3.1, first paragraph, in the sentence: "... as a
> part of Adrian Schüpbach's Phd thesis []". Missing the reference.
> 4 - In chapter 4, First paragraph, in the sentence: "In this chapter
> wewill".
> 
> Just one final suggestion, I believe that will be nice if introduction
> section have an image to show how SKB, Octopus, and Kaluga interact with
> each other.
> 
> I already applied the corrections and added here as a patch.
> 
> Best regards
> --
> 
> Rodrigo Siqueira
> Graduate Student
> Department of Computer Science
> University of São Paulo
> 


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